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There’s A Voice Deep Inside My Head (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

Deep, deep within my head, Is a voice chatting to me while I’m in bed. I’m listening to the voice The tiny voice inside my head Telling me it is full of dread. The dread inside my head. It’s all a mistake To listen to that voice But I guess I don’t have a choice But deep beneath my skin The voice whispering again To show me what to do, To start fresh, to start anew. To start a new life with a new hope With new people to interlope My head is spinning fast I hope the voice will last Deep, deep within my head.

Plaidypus 17-May-05/6:44 PM
All the lions are clawing at your guts right now, because they can't stand the fact that your work is more sincere than theirs. Thanks for remaining Un-pretentious. Hopefully they will start to pay more attention to the cocks up THEIR asses!!!




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