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Far away My angel sleeps Distantly Out of reach She does not stir Her resting eyes So beautifully Disguise the lies Her peaceful dream Soothes her mind A flaw in life She cannot find Dawn breaks through Soon she'll wake Another day A piece of cake Here I lie Eyes open wide Can't rest my head For the thoughts inside Toss and turn In sodden sweat My mind churns over I can't forget Fatigue overwhelms I tumble to dreams She is the star Always it seems Far away My angel sleeps Distantly Out of reach. CSN

anagram 31-Aug-02/5:50 PM
I said 'patently obvious' not painfully.Anyway my loved ones do not need me to be brilliant, just entertaining enough to appear so.Need to chat about football soon though. I do not have great memories of Argentina in football terms (World Cup 1978) but my great hero Mr. Mercury was very popular there I understand.Anyway I'm going to write my happy poem now to detract from the barrage of attacks you are having to deal with.Hang on in there girl.




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