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I sat beside the night (Free verse) by Niphredil

I looked outside; I saw the night Nestling on the ground And as it saw me it embraced And kissed me on my upturned face But never made a sound. We sat together, side by side, I rested in its fleece I felt its breath, I knew its pain The wild wind coursing through its veins And then an empty peace The night had gone, and its dark mantle Swept across my sight; But still I think and think again Of that enslaving moment when I sat beside the night.

DoubleU 14-May-05/2:38 PM
The Night has been poemed to death - wat isn't - but this one has been caught in beautiful thoughts. The neat rhyme is another plus. Some of your other poems are gbbldgk to me.




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