Poemranker [Replying] Fri Nov 22 02:10:08 PST 2024

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Far away My angel sleeps Distantly Out of reach She does not stir Her resting eyes So beautifully Disguise the lies Her peaceful dream Soothes her mind A flaw in life She cannot find Dawn breaks through Soon she'll wake Another day A piece of cake Here I lie Eyes open wide Can't rest my head For the thoughts inside Toss and turn In sodden sweat My mind churns over I can't forget Fatigue overwhelms I tumble to dreams She is the star Always it seems Far away My angel sleeps Distantly Out of reach. CSN

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31-Aug-02/5:13 PM

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My dear GW trust me it is patently obvious that a lot of deep thought and effort go into your works. Just that I have never considered writing my main hobby, I just write it occasionally when something either gets me down or really makes me happy or if I'm asked to pen some suitable words for a friends/family occasion, I have also been known to offer something up for nephews to use in school exams and the like but football (not US) is my real passion, music and pub quizzes also.It may be that one day I will take my own poetry more seriously but not just yet.I actually joined this site looking for inspiration but so far that has only came from yourself and one or two others. For the most part I enjoy reading the comments more than the poems(yours excluded).All that 'we're the greatest' and 'You're not worthy' crap splits my sides, especially when it is the so called adults talking to 14 year olds, touches left right and centre but is their ever a victory when the opposition are children.However I will keep in mind all that you say and would appreciate your thoughts on some of the others I have posted and not just the one that I consider the weakest.(Not that the others are literary masterpieces).

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