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Far away My angel sleeps Distantly Out of reach She does not stir Her resting eyes So beautifully Disguise the lies Her peaceful dream Soothes her mind A flaw in life She cannot find Dawn breaks through Soon she'll wake Another day A piece of cake Here I lie Eyes open wide Can't rest my head For the thoughts inside Toss and turn In sodden sweat My mind churns over I can't forget Fatigue overwhelms I tumble to dreams She is the star Always it seems Far away My angel sleeps Distantly Out of reach. CSN

anagram 31-Aug-02/5:12 PM
Replied to your previous comment on this the other night but then realised you were gone for a day or so, so saved the comment and will repost it now.Don't know if you got the reply when you asked 'she was sleeping now she works'I did post it as promised the next day but I can't find it now.If you are interested I will try and re-post




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