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Strings (Free verse) by Fayt

This world is held together by strings, Strings of Malevolence and Malice, These Strings bear much weight upon the world, The pain, The misery, It seems unbounded, This giving so much power to such trivial things. The strings go unnoticed, Never a passing thought, The strings hold power among mortals, Feeling that there is no way to break free of them, Below the endless chasms of the mind there is a thought, A thought of sanctified power, This is what can destroy the strings of control, A theory of world peace, A idea beyond any other.

Fayt 10-May-05/10:09 AM
1) i was testing out the features because im new here, i made this username about 6 months ago but never really used it, so i was seeing how it worked.

2)What do u mean by that?

3)I take that as a insult, i dont write poetry as a means to amuse others but as a means to vent my thoughts. Seeing as i was curious as of what others thought of it i posted it here; so don't criticize me by saying i am silly and others do it better.




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