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Censor (Concrete) by nentwined

ONE XXXX by X one XXXX the THOUGHTS trick -- XX le XX thro ugh my skull XXXX and DRAIN XX xxxx in to XXXXX my LIVER w he r e they are FILTERED

sliver 28-Apr-05/12:26 PM
It would work alot better if you could roll your word endings down, if you know what I mean. It would show how your thoughts have a tendency to droop at times.




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