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Trying to get signed? (Free verse) by Damien

I do not understand this frame of mind I only feel the truth inside it I fly One day I am someone with the highest ambition The next I could be complete if I forget this competition Because if I choose to acknowledge this as a worth full fight I will do something new, as I know how to catch people’s sight I will think of the next big thing not what you bring You humans will be shocked at what evolution sings So I will write and contemplate whilst growing from within Be persistent with my dreams and "just go for it" All I need now is an honest opinion of this If I can write this simply do I have a gift? But stop if you are judging as you scum destroy Leave me be rip me up cant you see I will find joy Can’t you see you’re the key that can begin this process? My expressions will progress, as my mind is not hopeless

Damien 25-Apr-05/1:12 AM
I only mentioned everyone makes assumptions INCLUDING me. I have no reason to argue back. I may come across hypocritical but thats because I am messing around at work (not an excuse) and I promise you this is not how I come across in conversation.




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