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Antique (Free verse) by Billy Fights

I guess every tear Is worth a wasted breath Maybe that's why I'm such a windbag I've been your hero Victorious in every battle For a kingdom in your name Like your morningstar A weapon of war no longer needed You have cast me aside, for unarmed combat I bare before you my blood Noble but tarnished, drink if you will I can offer no more than every drop

fevriere 24-Apr-05/3:34 PM
What's a morningstar? Is it one of those little choppy throwable disc things with spikes?

I must confess, the first stanza made me want to puke but the fourth I really liked (and the second was ok too - I'm just lost on the morningstar). Weird, eh?




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