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9/11 (Haiku) by TheDevil

I like Osama Osama's a damn cool guy Fuck U.S. to hell

god'swife 31-Aug-02/12:42 PM
The reason this poem stinks is because it says nothing. Nothing about the character who's expressing himself. Nothing about Osama and nothing about the U.S. It's simplistic and ignorant in it's structure. You could be talking about anybody or anything. I like Henry Ford/Henry ford's a damn cool guy/ Fuck riding a bike. Big deal. You want to push people's buttons? Do it with something of merit. You are boring.




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