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Couplet (Other) by fevriere

This will be wasted time, while she blesses The name that, soon, the same mouth confesses.

zodiac 22-Apr-05/1:41 PM
The commas around soon are unnecessary. Is it really more wasted time than other ways of passing time? That's The Eagles' philosophy, and look where it got them.




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