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Ode to Billy Mac (Ode) by windyone

Sometimes the nights seem so long you think of life and things gone wrong with tender thoughts and love to share you find your friend someone who cares and when his journey leads him on you're glad he came and sang his song

zodiac 22-Apr-05/1:34 PM
There's nothing really wrong with this poem except that it should be properly punctuated and doesn't really have anything distinguishing it. Original or striking poems about friends are hard to write. And there are far too many friend-poems on poemranker. If you're bent on doing it, though, here's an interesting place to start:

http://www.slate.com/id/2092680

Or here:

http://www.slate.com/id/3416, http://www.slate.com/id/33215, http://www.slate.com/id/2089046




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