zodiac22 Apr 2005

There's nothing really wrong with this poem except that it should be properly punctuated and doesn't really have anything distinguishing it. Original or striking poems about friends are hard to write. And there are far too many friend-poems on poemranker. If you're bent on doing it, though, here's an interesting place to start:

http://www.slate.com/id/2092680

Or here:

http://www.slate.com/id/3416, http://www.slate.com/id/33215, http://www.slate.com/id/2089046