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Baggage (3rd ending) (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Such unfortunate things are carried in the genes. A switchblade A ring of unused keys A spare umbilical cord A jolly roger A cat's eye A rabbit's ear A doorknob that came off in the hand. Screaming D.N.A and too many why chromosomes speech impediments extra fingers knees full of arthritis.

INTRANSIT 22-Apr-05/6:28 AM
Did you see the old ending? It was 5.5 lines long. I've always had an apostophe problem. lol. But misspellings? Thanks for your time E.P. 'Preciate ya driver!




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