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Trying to get signed? (Free verse) by Damien

I do not understand this frame of mind I only feel the truth inside it I fly One day I am someone with the highest ambition The next I could be complete if I forget this competition Because if I choose to acknowledge this as a worth full fight I will do something new, as I know how to catch people’s sight I will think of the next big thing not what you bring You humans will be shocked at what evolution sings So I will write and contemplate whilst growing from within Be persistent with my dreams and "just go for it" All I need now is an honest opinion of this If I can write this simply do I have a gift? But stop if you are judging as you scum destroy Leave me be rip me up cant you see I will find joy Can’t you see you’re the key that can begin this process? My expressions will progress, as my mind is not hopeless

zodiac 20-Apr-05/2:08 AM
Here are the assumptions you've made about poemranker users in the last week. And not that it matters, but I've also included how they're all incorrect.

1) zodiac doesn't use constructive criticism "without trying to make sense." -- I always use constructive criticism WHILE trying to make sense.

2) Goad is " bamboon... big headed egotistic being". -- Goad's not a bamboon, egotistic, or a real being.

3) You touched zodiac's "nerve". -- No you didn't.

4) zodiac sits around a computer all day. -- No, actually you're on poemranker a lot more often than I am. And I sit around a desert all day, not a computer.

5) zodiac is old. -- I'm not much older than you.

6) zodiac's egotistic. -- No, I was just trying to tell you to use their, instead of there. I'm not egotistic about pants, either, but if you went outside without yours, I'd try to let you know.

7) rockmage is a "little boy" and looks like a "d*ckhead". -- rockmage is about a hundred years old and looks like a v*gina.

8) rockmage "came here to offend." -- rockmage is consistently the nicest poemranker user. You're the offensive one and only came here to get your knob polished by juvenile kissasses.

9) Stephen Robbins is on your side. -- Stephen wishes you would fall in a well.

10) zodiac has "the intention to save the world." -- Actually, I'd like to see the world fall in a well.

11) ho_hum made about 8 assumptions. -- No he didn't.

12) ho_hum is still making assumptions even if he doesn't express them. -- No he's not. So shut the fuck up.




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