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Trying to get signed? (Free verse) by Damien

I do not understand this frame of mind I only feel the truth inside it I fly One day I am someone with the highest ambition The next I could be complete if I forget this competition Because if I choose to acknowledge this as a worth full fight I will do something new, as I know how to catch people’s sight I will think of the next big thing not what you bring You humans will be shocked at what evolution sings So I will write and contemplate whilst growing from within Be persistent with my dreams and "just go for it" All I need now is an honest opinion of this If I can write this simply do I have a gift? But stop if you are judging as you scum destroy Leave me be rip me up cant you see I will find joy Can’t you see you’re the key that can begin this process? My expressions will progress, as my mind is not hopeless

Damien 19-Apr-05/4:54 AM
Congratulations you have just made around 8 assumptions of the way I personally think JUST from one line, WOW you have a great imagination.
you only want positive comments on your poems
if you really wanted to improve you would welcome all constructive criticism, but you don't
you are a little too insecure to receive constructive criticism

Ans as for:
"All I need now is an honest opinion of this
If I can write this simply do I have a gift?",
AM I NOT ALOUD TO USE MY IMAGINATION




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