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Gaping Hole (Free verse) by sonawrote

I wish I could forget you Strip you from my mind why can’t my heart remember that I left you behind Why don’t I want to understand this wasn’t part of fate maybe it’s because you weren’t just to date I fell in love with open heart you saw into my soul you weren’t part of the plan to fill in this gaping hole so I ran from that which filled it and dug it deep again tried to cover traces with booze and drugs and then the hole was deep as ever at the bottom was my soul and I shed these tears because you use to make me whole I know it’s all my fault cause I was too afraid to believe in something better than the choices that I made and now the choices I made are swallowing my soul cause I really wanted you to fill this gaping hole.

Goad 19-Apr-05/4:27 AM
I've heard there are exercises/meditations you can do that will cause the gaping hole to gradually tighten back up again.

That way it's nice and snug when someone new comes along.




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