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15 Minute poem (Free verse) by Damien

Hello my loyal readers are you enjoying my bleapers Are my grammatical terms cheaper than flea keepers Or are you impressed by the way I appear to write Do you cheer my fight to help the fame in sight Yes thats right you are the only beings You can kick off my career or cause my fleeing Either way what I say will be the same regardless You cannot control the thoughts I believe are heartless Nor can you critisize someone who looks to fly We people just want to help you scale new heights I do not know how rare we are within this world Plus I am confused That I may lose what I unfurl And yes I know this looks like I think I'me a god But I'me not obviously we are all the same from the off So cause my fall or spark my rise Either way I look, its just through your eyes

thepinkbunnyofdoom 18-Apr-05/10:03 AM
If by attacking you mean, giving an honest and somewhat tactful opinion, I'm known for that. Everyone is egotistic(especially me). The difference between a street preformer and a concert musician is practice, and audience. With practice and editing, I think you might be a decent read.

<3 Jason




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