thepinkbunnyofdoom15 Apr 2005

"What exactly would you say,
If for no reason at all
I spat full in your face?"

In every scenario, I'd return the favor, save the death one, because well, I'd be dead. I think the last verse needs rethought entirely. The ending left me sourly disappointed. I thought you'd quite a large nut sack, until the last two lines in which apparently you spunked like never before, and lost them.

-8-, but I think a rewrite of the entire last verse would make this better.

<3 Jason