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Utensils of creation (Free verse) by Damien

My utensils of creation may mean nothing when I mention, Anything is possible if you hold the right intention, What I am meaning to say don’t get carried away, Be a human without a label that cannot and will not decay, And now I will write to you a guide within my self, It may not reach you but to someone else it may be of help, ---- I will absorb this mass creation today I will find peace, So that when I come across something it cannot backtrack me, I will acknowledge what I found today I will not judge, So that my mind can see the truth for everything it could, I will let go of all the meaning today I will be free, So I can find myself alone in my company I will receive, I will accept enlightenment today I feel like god, So I can share my love with all I should especially those lost, Then will come growth like any natural process, But if I see no improvement I will not feel hopeless, At the end of the day there are no words to say to drastically change your life, Politics prove this through words they miss but there actions control our minds.

Damien 14-Apr-05/7:31 AM
Ouch obviously touched a nerve there, well why dont you stop hanging around your computer all day and get a life.
1. I dont get stressed I am on the journey into spiritual development and meditation.
2. The last two lines simply mean it is not the words you use but the actions you choose.
3. I am only 17 meaning I have many more years to grow, how long have you.
4. Being offensive over someone elses work just shows how egotistic you really are you fu*king idiot.
5. The reason these poems do not make complete sense is because I freestyle them onto paper hence grammar is but a subject I will master with time and practice.
Swallow that mister.... mister..... mister......




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