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Alive (Free verse) by emilyowey

There is nothing more sure Than a change that comes of nothing Than a brand new view of every sight There is nothing worth holding More than moments born from silence, nothing More than the hours no one could plan There is no sensation Like the feeling of complete And total surprise, like sunshine Out of nowhere There are no words Like the ones no one expects Like the sound of pure revelation There is no thing more real Than complete surrender

thepinkbunnyofdoom 9-Apr-05/10:20 AM
First off there is a reply button next on the right hand side of every comment, use it. Second, its not about what you feel anymore the second you hit the submit button is it? You are being told, very blunt and honestly, that no, it doesn't add to the "continuity and style". It makes what could have been some okay verse, better used as toliet paper than read.




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