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ceiling (Free verse) by not_a_philosopher

If God is in the ceiling and shame is on the floor, then I would rather have my head in the clouds all day, then waste time staring at two shuffling feet.

Dovina 7-Apr-05/12:29 PM
The last verse doesn't fit - it would have to deal with shame to fit. then -> than.




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