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she is... (Free verse) by Sapphire

of earth and spice, had carried in on wind crisp of air and orbs, sky blue tinged apple cheeks with flesh begging to be bitten flamed ropes falling over shoulders, i'm smitten

Christof 30-Aug-02/8:29 AM
The second two lines redeem the first, which are confused. By the end though, I'm smitten too.




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