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Vestigial Tail (Free verse) by zodiac

Things we believed as children are all true: we're robots, basement science. Flesh and bone stretched past its present borders once when we were tendriled on an amneotic sea. But slow to learn. Now Girly's laughing, bony hand pressed to her face, says - God, oh you would have to've known, how could you not have known? She shakes like cream. When the truth is, I knew. Bathed in a kitchen sink, my mother dragged soapsuds to shape me: her nose, a father's chin, all secondhand and mentionless (except that keyhole scar - where they wound me while I slept.) So taught my hands to pass it, bound me in a skin. But I was feral once, and snag- toothed prowled my natal landscape like a djinn. Oh, its ghost I feel now - it's waving like a flag.

zodiac 24-Mar-05/4:09 AM
I really meant she shakes like the noun cream - which, I believe, shakes differently from water, juice, or Fanta. Not to mention that it shakes into milkshakes.

Which of the following associations would you guess I'm trying to make:
a) The narrator has just discovered he's gay, or
b) The narrator has just discovered he has an abnormally large circumsized cock?

I have to say, though I'm rooting for b), I suspect a).




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