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Rusty knife to the kidney (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

She asked him what the color of her eyes were. He said "Aren't they usually red?" Her reply? "Heres your engagement ring, and your rib."

Dovina 22-Mar-05/10:08 AM
It is poetry or poetrye because INTRANSIT wrote it and because I have found most of his poems uniquely saying things I understand and relate to. This one in particular is terse, masculine, and tight. Go ahead and tell me about my sexual attraction based on what I just said. Everythiung is sexual; I can only speak from a sexual position. If you live in a universe where that's not the case, I have no objection.




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