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will you? (Free verse) by Sapphire

dip fingers into hues of wine paint the skies of ancient time braid the days in shining twine the plaits of night dark and divine hold the universe out to you sublime all for want, your heart, be mine

tadpole 21-Mar-05/8:51 PM
I like the last line, and a lot of the rest of it too. I think it could flow a lot better though.




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