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Apostrophetic Loss (Free verse) by Dovina

Its an ambiguous shame doesnt matter theyve said tove lost jot and tittle period and dash for colloquialisms sake Renegade poet comedians Youd stop it but cant your uncool theyd say dims the word havent a clue to incrowds code Theydve cut vowels too but couldnt agree on clubs slang so theyve invented bow’ls instead broken cool rules makin other language its my it your it its a shame all its its and theyve needed only it Apostrophes end or apostrophetic loss’

zodiac 18-Mar-05/9:13 PM
Can I suggest something?

The basis for your saying I don't make any sense is pretty much 'I, Dovina, say so.'

The basis for your saying you're not sexist, racist, or anythingelse-ist is definitely 'I, Dovina, say so.'

Doesn't that seem like a pretty weak thing to base your whole conception of things on?




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