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the lips of your mouth (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil

the lips of your mouth are of a colour which cannot be found in the flowers or the skies it cannot be seen in stones bird feathers beetle wings the eyes of fishes it does not appear in any of the art that litters the world your lips - my wish is that you might lift them to me one day

Tintagiles 18-Mar-05/6:51 PM
Why the 'eyes of fishes', which are rather boring, as opposed to their scales, which can be quite rainbow-like?

And if you're adoring someone, isn't requesting them to lift their lips a bit ungallant -- even if they're shorter, they're supposed to be on a pedestal...




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