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Cancer Haikus (Free verse) by poetandknowit

#20 i asked you to fight until i learned to pronounce the thing killing you #26 if these cells knew you would they keep pushing forward or apologize #31 four in the morning i miss the hospital food and the nurse's smile #40 morphine takes your pain so much left to say to you please, do not go yet #50 sometime in the night just as i walked through the door the embalmer called

Venus 29-Aug-02/10:40 PM
These are fantastic, from one who's been there. I'll give it a 10/10 to make up for anything you may have lost in the revisions.




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