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Snow Sucks (Free verse) by JoyLuck

S F G S O N U C ALL U N C I K S W K S B

thepinkbunnyofdoom 12-Mar-05/1:22 AM
Look close. All is alone yet together. Where as the rest of the message is broken and scattered. Accidental or no, I see the ALL, being together but alone, as artistic. The majority of the letters are scattered across the page, brought together by a mental zig zaging connection. Its individualism yet connection to the other letters, is what in my mind, is so poetic about it.

<3 Jason




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