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Apostrophetic Loss (Free verse) by Dovina

Its an ambiguous shame doesnt matter theyve said tove lost jot and tittle period and dash for colloquialisms sake Renegade poet comedians Youd stop it but cant your uncool theyd say dims the word havent a clue to incrowds code Theydve cut vowels too but couldnt agree on clubs slang so theyve invented bow’ls instead broken cool rules makin other language its my it your it its a shame all its its and theyve needed only it Apostrophes end or apostrophetic loss’

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 10-Mar-05/5:37 PM
Your just moody because you're incrowd consists of you, jroday and al-naafiysh. And let's not forget that jroday and al-naafiysh are two individuals who took time out of their busy schedules to discuss whether or not an individual black person was more diverse than an individual white person. You can't get more bow'ls than that.




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