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My days work (Free verse) by lucky_cmc

A days work has just been completed And what do I have to show it my aching feet, my sore back, and my sore hands. My days work has been complete. I finish practicing and i clean my room, Hey, I even looked over music that I probably can't play But I feel complete with a very good tired. My sleepy eyes and my hurt head. I've finished what I had to do. I finish my goal for today, Maybe tomorrow will be easier. But will see cause tomorrow is another day.

crooked_smile 9-Mar-05/4:00 PM
um, this was not, to be frank, very good
a) we all have a days work to do, and you weren't really compelling enough to make me think yours was special

2)it was rather bland and run of the mill

-lia




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