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Poet, Earth mover (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

As other children bat portently at tetherball and four square a boy walks a hot walk wearing the full weight of his angry red shirt while the heels of his torn bluejeans stir the gravel and dirt that measure the schoolyard fence he pauses only once to mimic the wounded dog howl of a tractors' brakes.

nentwined 9-Mar-05/3:41 PM
What, in 100 words or less, were you trying to get at with the portent of playing tether ball and four square? :)

And what is a "hot walk"?

And what is the idea, here, really? :)




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