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exercise (Free verse) by JoyLuck

Propel Fitness Water, A bland product packaged in a fancy bottle. I am one of those weekend poets everybody rants about. I download pornography off the internet, while reading my homework. I tried downloading to indie music to feel like I am in the scene. I watch Pimp My Ride. My cell phone has more recent outgoing calls than incoming. My buddy list is filled with people I do not know. My roomate's ex girlfriend tried to come on to me during a ski trip in West Virginia. She slept in my hotel room on the other bed. Random arrangements of letters do not make a picture or a poem.

RION12 7-Mar-05/7:01 PM
Cool. I like the way you make everything sound so simple. I like that kind of stuff in poems. I rate this poem and poet a 10.




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