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Forsaken (Free verse) by DevilBuni

On my own two legs I stand With shattered heart in hand I watch you flee in fear While my eyes begin to tear Unsure of what I've done As you turn away and shun The one you feared to lose I never made you choose Content with what we had Now we are unable to go back By the path that you had taken Friendship is forsaken

DevilBuni 2-Mar-05/7:48 PM
Most of my poems I write real quick when it comes in my head, so I jot it down and always forget the punctuation. Im working on that and the grammar. I've been rereading my poetry journal and working on it so when I post stuff here or on my other site it will be ready.

As far as the content - thats my business. Im not trying to connect with anyone. Those were just the words that came to me one day. Im not saying its the greatest, but thats what made sense to me. Im not going to try and explain the situation other than it was more than a "friend dissing me."




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