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Homecoming Parade (Lyric) by wilco

I stopped smoking yesterday just for a change. The only problem is the fire went out years ago. I stopped breathing yesterday just for a change. The only problem is the air went stale years ago. And all the people stood in line without a thought of passing time. They moved along so orderly with the procession that they made But this is not a homecoming parade. I quit my day job yesterday It’s such a waste. The only problem is I was fired days ago. I quit my life today It’s such a waste. The only problem is I quit living years ago. And all the people stood in line without a thought of passing time. They waited there so patiently with the confessions that they made But this is not a homecoming parade. homecoming parade homecoming parade homecoming parade (fade out)

Dovina 27-Feb-05/6:05 AM
Thought provoking. I can hear it with an acoustic guitar from a coffee house stool. Not bad.




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