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It’s the Management (Free verse) by Dovina

Down the stairs we tramped floor by floor fifty to go just precaution because of some shaking. Loudspeaker says, “Go back! Earthquake over. All clear. That fire you see in the North Tower has no effect here.” Our boss man says, “Go down” so we continue remain in file choosing years of admiration over a loudspeaker. floor by floor forty to go facing upbound employees who call it a joke and say, “Go back.” Later we watch from blocks away workers for lesser bosses come tumbling down.

Bhaskaryya 25-Feb-05/10:25 PM
Lol..that was good.

By the way, what's the job of a fireman during earthquake disasters?? May be they do have work, just that I'm unaware of it! ;)

Nice poem!




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