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Getting Pumped Up to Get Laid (Other) by PodPoet

Getting pumped up to get laid Building muscle to pave the way Pounds shed, muscles flaunted Wanting so desperately to be wanted You hate the thought of a shirt Worked too hard to cover up your work Those hard shapes define a lifestyle Muscles cover weakness...for a while But can a sexy new bod fill the hole Or will something else make life meaningful You're a poster boy of the physically fine Until, one day, you see the first sign And to gym workouts you add another regimen: Popping pills, as lesions threaten the skin What went wrong, you ask What mistake What sin

Shardik 22-Feb-05/3:33 PM
Plus, what can I say that Zodiac already hasn't?
Your mediocrity is revolting at best.




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