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Rusty knife to the kidney (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

She asked him what the color of her eyes were. He said "Aren't they usually red?" Her reply? "Heres your engagement ring, and your rib."

Dovina 20-Feb-05/6:33 AM
Suggestion: The poet seems to feel something and finds a unique way of letting me feel something too.




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