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Rusty knife to the kidney (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

She asked him what the color of her eyes were. He said "Aren't they usually red?" Her reply? "Heres your engagement ring, and your rib."

zodiac 20-Feb-05/5:26 AM
Suggestion: Because it's short, oddly indented, and has the smell of aphorism about it.




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