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Rusty knife to the kidney
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INTRANSIT
She asked him what the color of her eyes were. He said "Aren't they usually red?" Her reply? "Heres your engagement ring, and your rib."
Dovina
19-Feb-05/10:12 AM
Don't know about Ezra, but the guy with a rustily severed kidney isn't laughing. To me it's poetry. Can't say why, just is.
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