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The Man I Love (Free verse) by Dovina

is not the all-American macho, handsome, athletic, rich hunk they’re promoting. My man is the one with his morning coffee pensively pondering a page - clean, but maybe not shaven gentleman, thinker, comic. He can be a bit fat or maybe too thin homely perhaps or drift with the wind. But if his words rest like pillows and he understands mine if he knows what I mean and when I get him, grins then his car doesn’t matter his face can be scarred he can have a few habits and nights with the boys because I’ve got what I want and he knows it.

richa 18-Feb-05/9:53 AM
What exactly have you been hearing for 50 years. That the individual black person is more diverse than the individual white person. Well of course that is true, black people for instance have dark skin. Do any white people have dark skin? No. I don't need to read the bible to know that. Jesus christ, no wonder your brain went wonky.




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