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The Man I Love (Free verse) by Dovina

is not the all-American macho, handsome, athletic, rich hunk they’re promoting. My man is the one with his morning coffee pensively pondering a page - clean, but maybe not shaven gentleman, thinker, comic. He can be a bit fat or maybe too thin homely perhaps or drift with the wind. But if his words rest like pillows and he understands mine if he knows what I mean and when I get him, grins then his car doesn’t matter his face can be scarred he can have a few habits and nights with the boys because I’ve got what I want and he knows it.

zodiac 17-Feb-05/4:29 AM
You're finally in those flattering shoes.

No, wait, that's just some random assumption and about as groundless as your aboveposted comment.




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