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a study in blossoms and beauty (Free verse) by oneglove
A flower, celebrated amongst the beauty of nature
Its delicate stem and vibrant petals
Painted in lush tones of fire and plum
Reach to the sun to welcome the coming day
Its fragile body dances in soft breezes
Oblivious to the world around it
So simple, so pure, so beautiful
A flower, truly a sight to behold
To compare you, my beloved, to a flower?
Ludicrous. An understatement in every sense of the word
Does one compare a mountain to an ant hill?
Are the ponds and streams even mentioned with the ocean?
Then why my love compare you to a flower?
If a season of growth can spawn such beauty
If it takes only months to create such acclaim
Then how much more inconceivable is my precious?
Aged now 19 years and with the beauty of a thousand seasons
To compare my beloved to a flower? An outrage.
Burnt orange turns to crippled brown
The brightest crimsons shrivel and fade
The cold of winter, the sting of ice
And a flower is nothing more than rusted earth.
When cold winds whistle and trees turn bare
You, my darling, still stand with all your splendor
The cold air kissing your cheeks, adding a hint of sapphire
Your eyes, always warm, strengthen to heat the room
Your lips every bit as delicate as the warmer days before
A petalâs beauty is only surface deep
And any passerby can revel in all its beauty
But you, my love, my sweet, only open up to me
And it is there, inside, where your true beauty is revealed
The roseâs sweet scent canât match the sweetness of your heart
And the brightest lily is dull beside your soul
To compare my beloved to a flower? Unthinkable.
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