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saving myself for marriage (Haiku) by Venus

teasing proud and high ripened cherry on its stem... broken starfish cry

Venus 29-Aug-02/9:41 AM
DA - I reckon 'cries' would be grammatically correct, but I just liked the short sound of 'cry' - thanks for the legitimate criticism though.




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