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Pedophile (Free verse) by Lenore

I know who you are you scum sucking freak! Your Daddy didn't love you he said you were weak. Your Mamma hid bruises and busted up bones, She left you in squalor with nobody home. Now your a big boy you hold all the power until you see Daddy, He still makes you cower. HA HA!! Your sick and your twisted you know that its true the urges come quickly you know what to do. How many kids before you are done? The F.B.I.'s coming fucker---- How fast can you run?

god'swife 29-Aug-02/9:41 AM
This is really poignant. No joke. You've got the elements and the child being twisted into a monster and then hated by society is sad reality. I work with at risk youth. It's so complicated. I look in some of their eye's sometimes and just for a second there's this flash of knowing it's over for them. Some of the lines are still too simple. I think you could do more with this one. 7




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