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Valentine's Day is Two Days Away and I Don't Feel Loved (Free verse) by MacFrantic

Those eyes The depths they see Her charming come-hithers Embracing me Now there Does she now look past? Am I to be forgotten? This fragile heart Lost among them forgotten?

brazen 13-Feb-05/1:24 AM
i like the first stanze, but it is all a little too random for me...though i admit to being just as random.




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