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CUPID (Free verse) by al-naafiysh

I'm so happy I don't know what to do, perhaps smile at the world, and kick off my shoes dance a jig, and swing hips low. Pop it back up and give'm some mo' Today I'm singing to a different tune. One that has a melody that keeps me consumed. So I'm spreading this happiness to everyone I meet,being on cloud nine is where I can be reached. I wanna share this joy, this feelin' within,cause cupid done struck me in my heart again.

MacFrantic 12-Feb-05/7:42 PM
Man, that was such an entertaining poem! Little changes here and there-I won't be specific- and it's perfect! *10*

Can you put a single stanza in your "favorites" section?




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