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My Angel (Free verse) by jroday

Yea tho the angels doth line up to see thy lovely face. Admiring thy beauty, elegance and grace. Mortals too are trembling at the sight their eyes doth see. Mine heart doth give thanks, for this lady who stood by me. Never caring what the world outside doth feel, for as we rode this roller coster of life, we knew that our love was for real. Thou didst stroll into my life at a time when I was so all along, whispering into the darkness, inspiring mine soul to happily moan. Watching thy nakedness dance around playfully for mine eyes to see. Surely thou doth knowest ye were tailor made in Heaven for me. I have been to hell and back done things a man should never do. But thou didst turn me inside out, for that, I shalt dedicate my love forever to you. Ye have breathed life back into a flower that had wilted and died. Having thee in mine life, is worth all the tears mine eyes have cried.

MacFrantic 12-Feb-05/7:38 PM
Interesting venture.
The structure could use some work.
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