Dovina12 Feb 2005

A tender expression of love. The king James English is a nice touch, but several places, I believe the grammar is wrong.
Line 1 - "doth" is spelled "doeth", but should be "do" in the plural, or just leave it out. Other lines similar.

"shalt" should be "shall" after an I.

"surely thou doth knowest" -> surely thou knowest

"inspiring my soul to happily moan" - good line.