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Prayer of Forgiveness (Free verse) by Dovina

I forgive You for allowing sickness injustice, earthquakes and cruel people who hurt me as I forgive those who sin against me

Dovina 11-Feb-05/11:56 AM
I read your poem and left a comment. Frankly, I would not have known it was about God if you hadn't commented here as you did.

Mine is, as you suspect, a conversation with God, or rather a prayer to God. It's low key in order to keep the tone of ordinary prayer, an understatemint.




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